Post by Quietpaw on Jan 28, 2009 16:43:14 GMT -5
Name: Brokeneyes
Gender: Tom
Age: 24 moons
Type: Shadowclan
Rank: Warrior
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Personality: Angry alot of the time, quiet, a real jerk, he loves to fight, and loves the taste of blood. He's totally mean. He gets annoyed easy and can't stand anything happy, he doesn't love because he doesn't know how to. With a severe lack of any significant parental figures, He disrespects any and all authority figures execpt for the leader. He is very self sufficient, and dislikes having to work with anyone who won't listen to him, and do everything that he says. This leads to quite a few disputes with him as the center. Dark, brooding, and a proverbial ball of hate, he has no trust for any one, he keeps to himself and only speaks when he absolutely must throw his two cents in.
Appearance: Brokeneye's eyes are a strange twisted green/yellow. Medium sized body, muscular and firm, while lithe and graceful. His coat is Brown! Short, glistening, and a beautiful mahogany brown with a hint of red in it. His ears that are quite large with rounded tips, and his muzzle is square and pointed with a bit of white on it. His whiskers are a bit drawn backwards and don't really stick out. He has a bit of a striped pattern in his brown fur, and his tail is long and half the time is dragged across the ground.
History: Brokeneyes lived with his both his parents, outside of any clan, back then his name was Shard. He never really liked them, they always seemed to be watching over him. This lasted until he had snuck away from them one day. He was so excited, that he could do what ever he wanted to. He went where he was always told not to go. He tripped and ran into an other dragon, a she-cat named Cherryblossom. They had quickly became friends. He had learned from her that their parents hated each other. Being the reason they had never seen each other before.
Cherryblossom came up with a plan to leave, they ran swiftly through the cold night, making sure to keep moving, so that there parents wouldn't find them. They came upon Shadowclan, and stayed there for many moons. But soon, Cherryblossom became sick, after an attack by an adder, The medicine cat told Shard something he'll never forget.
"I was able to heal her wound since it wasn’t too close to her heart. But the poison is already making its way into her bloodstream. Cherryblossom's case is a troublesome one, so judging by how much she’s prolonged it on her own…she only has 12 days. 12 ½ if you count right now. I’m sorry, Shard.” The medicine cat said sadly. ' 12 days....' Shard's mind was racing, what would he do without her. Shards insides were cringing. He had thought about a life with Cherryblossom. She made him content; happy. Without her…nothing seemed to make sense. Nothing seemed to matter.
Cherryblossom was his world. Everyday he came and spent it with her, he always was kind and caring around her, he spent every second with her, he even slept beside her. Every morning he would walk in and say "I love you" she would smile back, and say "I love you to". However on the last day they had together, he never left her side, they watched the sunrise, and the sunset, and it was time for her to go.
"I’ll love you forever.”Shard's eyes seemed to say as Cherryblossom's eyes became heavy. A smile, her last smile, "Thank you Shard, i'm going to miss you, and i'll always love you to" Cherryblossom murmured weakly, before her eyes shut; forever shielding them from the world. "What’re you thanking me for, Ch-" but Shard’s voice trailed off along with his smile when he stared at his pale blossom whose eyes was no longer open.
Green eyes looked up at the sky; immediately realizing that the sun had set; replaced with a starry night sky. Silence filled the air. “…Cherryblossom?” Shard asked as he shook her a little. To no avail, she did not open her eyes and smile; telling him it was all joke.
Cherryblossom couldn’t be…
"Shard"
...gone forever…
"Thank you lover-tom"
…That couldn’t have been the last time he could kiss her…
"Your so stubborn Shard"
…The last words he would hear from her……….
"I…miss you!"
…The last smile he would see...
"I love you with all my heart!"
Was it…?
…But it was. His blossom, the love of his life, the She-cat he had planned to love, to start a family with. His vision became blurred with tears. He allowed them to fall onto Cherryblossom’s cold cheeks as he laid on her not willing to let go. "It wasn’t…supposed to end this way…" Shard cried, The medicine cat patted his friends shoulder in an attempt to comfort him, but he knew better than anyone else that Shard was broken; perhaps beyond repair.
A few moons later he became the way he is today, only he goes by the name of Brokeneyes.
Theme song- Boulevard of broken dreams - Green day
RP example- Brokeneyes padded through out the marshes, near Shadowclan camp, His twisted eyes glared at everything. He had no past anymore, and he didn't know if he had a future, everything he tried to forget, it haunted him. 'Maybe I should snatch an animal on the way' He thought. Following his ears and nose, he was lead to the hole where the ground hog would occasionally poke it’s head out. Crouching low, he crept up toward the hole, being sure to stay very very low. Brokeneye's watched as it poked it’s head out, then leapt at it. It dove back into the hole just in time, so instead of getting the warm blood and juicy meat Brokeneye's wanted, he got a mouth full out dirt. 'Yummy' he grumbled inwardly. He gave up on the groundhog and spotted a shrew, he dove after it biting right into it. Brokeneye's licked his lips with his tongue, enjoying the mixed flavor of blood and meat. Brokeneye's took the shrew back to camp
Gender: Tom
Age: 24 moons
Type: Shadowclan
Rank: Warrior
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Personality: Angry alot of the time, quiet, a real jerk, he loves to fight, and loves the taste of blood. He's totally mean. He gets annoyed easy and can't stand anything happy, he doesn't love because he doesn't know how to. With a severe lack of any significant parental figures, He disrespects any and all authority figures execpt for the leader. He is very self sufficient, and dislikes having to work with anyone who won't listen to him, and do everything that he says. This leads to quite a few disputes with him as the center. Dark, brooding, and a proverbial ball of hate, he has no trust for any one, he keeps to himself and only speaks when he absolutely must throw his two cents in.
Appearance: Brokeneye's eyes are a strange twisted green/yellow. Medium sized body, muscular and firm, while lithe and graceful. His coat is Brown! Short, glistening, and a beautiful mahogany brown with a hint of red in it. His ears that are quite large with rounded tips, and his muzzle is square and pointed with a bit of white on it. His whiskers are a bit drawn backwards and don't really stick out. He has a bit of a striped pattern in his brown fur, and his tail is long and half the time is dragged across the ground.
History: Brokeneyes lived with his both his parents, outside of any clan, back then his name was Shard. He never really liked them, they always seemed to be watching over him. This lasted until he had snuck away from them one day. He was so excited, that he could do what ever he wanted to. He went where he was always told not to go. He tripped and ran into an other dragon, a she-cat named Cherryblossom. They had quickly became friends. He had learned from her that their parents hated each other. Being the reason they had never seen each other before.
Cherryblossom came up with a plan to leave, they ran swiftly through the cold night, making sure to keep moving, so that there parents wouldn't find them. They came upon Shadowclan, and stayed there for many moons. But soon, Cherryblossom became sick, after an attack by an adder, The medicine cat told Shard something he'll never forget.
"I was able to heal her wound since it wasn’t too close to her heart. But the poison is already making its way into her bloodstream. Cherryblossom's case is a troublesome one, so judging by how much she’s prolonged it on her own…she only has 12 days. 12 ½ if you count right now. I’m sorry, Shard.” The medicine cat said sadly. ' 12 days....' Shard's mind was racing, what would he do without her. Shards insides were cringing. He had thought about a life with Cherryblossom. She made him content; happy. Without her…nothing seemed to make sense. Nothing seemed to matter.
Cherryblossom was his world. Everyday he came and spent it with her, he always was kind and caring around her, he spent every second with her, he even slept beside her. Every morning he would walk in and say "I love you" she would smile back, and say "I love you to". However on the last day they had together, he never left her side, they watched the sunrise, and the sunset, and it was time for her to go.
"I’ll love you forever.”Shard's eyes seemed to say as Cherryblossom's eyes became heavy. A smile, her last smile, "Thank you Shard, i'm going to miss you, and i'll always love you to" Cherryblossom murmured weakly, before her eyes shut; forever shielding them from the world. "What’re you thanking me for, Ch-" but Shard’s voice trailed off along with his smile when he stared at his pale blossom whose eyes was no longer open.
Green eyes looked up at the sky; immediately realizing that the sun had set; replaced with a starry night sky. Silence filled the air. “…Cherryblossom?” Shard asked as he shook her a little. To no avail, she did not open her eyes and smile; telling him it was all joke.
Cherryblossom couldn’t be…
"Shard"
...gone forever…
"Thank you lover-tom"
…That couldn’t have been the last time he could kiss her…
"Your so stubborn Shard"
…The last words he would hear from her……….
"I…miss you!"
…The last smile he would see...
"I love you with all my heart!"
Was it…?
…But it was. His blossom, the love of his life, the She-cat he had planned to love, to start a family with. His vision became blurred with tears. He allowed them to fall onto Cherryblossom’s cold cheeks as he laid on her not willing to let go. "It wasn’t…supposed to end this way…" Shard cried, The medicine cat patted his friends shoulder in an attempt to comfort him, but he knew better than anyone else that Shard was broken; perhaps beyond repair.
A few moons later he became the way he is today, only he goes by the name of Brokeneyes.
Theme song- Boulevard of broken dreams - Green day
RP example- Brokeneyes padded through out the marshes, near Shadowclan camp, His twisted eyes glared at everything. He had no past anymore, and he didn't know if he had a future, everything he tried to forget, it haunted him. 'Maybe I should snatch an animal on the way' He thought. Following his ears and nose, he was lead to the hole where the ground hog would occasionally poke it’s head out. Crouching low, he crept up toward the hole, being sure to stay very very low. Brokeneye's watched as it poked it’s head out, then leapt at it. It dove back into the hole just in time, so instead of getting the warm blood and juicy meat Brokeneye's wanted, he got a mouth full out dirt. 'Yummy' he grumbled inwardly. He gave up on the groundhog and spotted a shrew, he dove after it biting right into it. Brokeneye's licked his lips with his tongue, enjoying the mixed flavor of blood and meat. Brokeneye's took the shrew back to camp
